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[Erik the Juiceman MikeEp3]

Enjoyable watch.

I didn't enjoy this one as much as #1 either but it was still an enjoyable watch. I think maybe a problem is that I'm not American so my sense of humour is a bit different?

Some bits of animation were better than before - you seem to be improving in that respect.

[Erik the Juiceman MikeEp2]

I couldn't detect any 'puffs'...

This episode didn't have an outstanding joke like the other did (although it's difficult to appeal to my humour so don't let that bother you).

One criticism I'd make is that most of what the bronco was saying I couldn't understand. Or is that a joke?

(I'm not American, so if they're notoriously hard to understand, I wouldn't know.)

[Erik the Juiceman MikeEp1]

A promising start to the series

The bit where they go to bed is hilarious!

The sound effects with all the cheering and stuff was excellent and you've managed to make this a great sit-com type thing.

It may not be as well animated (or quite as funny so far) as some alternatives (like College University) but it's still well worth watching.

I don't really have any real suggestions other than to improve the animation. Also, whilst good as it is, the script could have been better.

However, I'm sure you'll improve with practise.

And as it is, it's still definitely worth watching.

[FLASH OFF]

I take it this is a pastiche on the NG public?

Only entertained in the end by senseless violence?

I liked it. Not immensely tho'

[Z(old Movie) Flash4psyguy]

Erm...

Well, it didn't make much sense to me but I don't know him.

I read the previous reviews after watching the movie and he seems to have enjoyed it, so I suppose that's your aim fulfilled?

Well done I guess...

Just isn't funny to us 'outsiders' though. As you know yourself.

[Z(old Movie) Stk]

Laugh with me!

Funny and silly.

I was rather surprised at all the high review scores you got and it doesn't quite match up to your 1.87... ah well... I suppose folk who don't like it won't bother to review?

You should have had another 'laugh with me' near the end though and had some sort of silly noise when sonic fell...

'twas an enjoyable watch.

Muchos gracias.

[Marcell delMar, page 1]

Didn't understand the ending...

The movie looked good, although I think the introduction was the better looking than the rest. Although that's probably more a reflection on the difficulty of drawing people compared to buildings/cars than anything else.

I really liked the way you used limited colours to suggest a gradient (like for around the sun, on the bridge, in the water...).

As the previous person said, subtitles would do a world of good. If you're worried about them spoiling it for others, you can make a button to turn them on and off. (Ask me if you don't know how.)

I couldn't understand some parts of what the guy said and that was a shame...

Also, I didn't understand why subtitles suddenly appeared at the end? I couldn't quite put my finger on what was going on. I understood it was Marcel going mental and shooting repeatedly at the old guy, but wasn't entirely sure...

the subtitles just confused me as they weren't there before...

By the way, Marcel looks a bit like Michael Jackson.

[Java Intergalactica]

A quick project, I take it?

I guessed that because of the opening sound cripped from Y-Town, the length, the less than perfect animation...

It's still a damn sight better than most stuff on this site and I'll be proud if I make something equally good before next summer. (2004)

The drawings look as if not a lot of time was taken over each one. (Although with the number of drawings you must have had to do, I'm sure the animation still took ages to make.)

I like the way you animate both mouths in this movie (or maybe animate one and then duplicate it? That's the way it looks...)

In Frofrog, you seem to concentrate on just one mouth - something I thought was a bit of a shame as you don't immediately realise that there's 2 mouths.

Whilst I said the drawings look quick and that, they still look good and it's nice how you redraw some stuff frame by frame to make it wibble. Nice effect, although not nearly as nice as the actual episode. ;)

Basically, the graphics are top notch.

The sound, whilst you say it wouldn't win any awards (and indeed it isn't amongst the best I've seen) it gets the job done and to be honest the look and sound made the joke almost funnier for me. It looked like a beginners Flash (although it obviously isn't) in the same way that Yoshi's Island looks like a child's drawing.

I hope you understand what I mean as that's meant to be a nice thing! :)

I actually it rather funny the first time I watched it and burst out laughing (the first time since I got up and went to work). (That's the main reason for the 7 and I enjoyed the laugh so much I had to decide between a 7 and 8.

If the voices had been perfect, it may not have been quite as funny.

I liked the ambient music. I'd have liked it to go on forever though after the animation so I could have listened to it a bit longer. ;)

Is that all you? I take it those words are gibberish? In any case, I think the 'music' works well as an ambient sound and it really sounds like an alien cafe...

...not that I've ever been in one...

One criticism - in the button to replay, you need to click straight on the text. You obviously know how to do your hit boxes so I can't think why it'd be like that...

It would be much better if the hit box was the size of the whole rectangle.

Personally, I'd like to see you make more short stuff like this in addition to your big series. :)

Frofrog looks superb but you have a wicked sense of humour and so it's a real shame that you don't submit more stuff.

On a totally different note, I was going to ask you to e-mail me at [e-mail] as I didn't know your address. (You don't let folk access it via your profile.) Then I saw it in your movie... hehe

I'll e-mail you after I've had some sleep. In any case, hotmail isn't working perfectly for me at the moment so I think their site may be having problems or something...

McRhyme responds:

This sure was a quick thing I made. I'm sorry I didn't respond to this before. It was just that I was flooded with crapreviews on this movie. So I didn't bother reading them all!

Hope you see you review DF#2!