Quality.
The story itself is far from the best, but the wonderful way in which the story is told.
Each second is filled with so many wonderful images - it's truly a feast for the eyes.
I love your voice, the style and specially the part talking about the history of the guy.
The music is truly excellent, the zoom in at the end was an excellent touch and the ending sequence complete with crook and your name spraypainted on (with nice SFX and drip I must add) is so excellent.
However, the fact that you start saying something at the end ('the wavy lines at the side of the screen whoo-oo-whoo-oo) and that's clipped off ruins the professional look.
I can't actually work out what this line has to do with the rest of the movie...
Seriously, it's just such a wonderful feast for the eyes and some of the highlights (specially the bits on your hair) bring to mind the plastic wrap filter.