I enjoyed this and chuckled for the most part.
I do love the NG intro you had here and in theprevious episode - cool voices and sounds.
The cartoon was nice and fast paced, with everything following a sensible narrative without being overly predictable.
I liked both phone conversations - in the cartoon and in the commentary.
One thing - I feel that after the movie's loaded, you should just freeze it on a play button, showing the intros after we click play. And at the end, you might as well return us to the meny automatically rather than have us press one extra button. Minor niggles, but presentation counts...
Though I'd maybe say even more jokes could have been packed in, with a faster pace in places and cutting sections without adversely affecting anything, I enjoyed this and chuckled for the most part.