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[2 years of animation]

with some

Watched through twice. My favourite parts are the mouth with the incredible saliva animation, the giant with the guy wriggling and the funky robot-creature with tentacle things for legs.

Was the green Blob for Mindchamber's enemy competition thing?

+++ Transitions well timed to music.

+++++ Fast paced

++++ An interesting variety of subject matter and visual styles.

Nothing negative to say really. I suppose a weak point for me was when the striding man came up onto the camera again and the few seconds following that. Just an impression I got, perhaps with the slightly slower pace at that point. Maybe it was also that my eyes were tired from trying not to blink. ;-)

Some could have been better drawn, but for a composite of abandoned projects, it's incredible.

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Really loved watching this. Fast paced, with some incredible parts.

LaserKarl responds:

Thanks man :)

The green blob was for a game (thats got abandoned)...

I've actally since i submitted this realised that i have lots of better stuff laying around. haha, so i guess i could have done it even better. But i didnt really think it would be this "big", i was expecting a score around 3.3. Haha :)

[Bunnycat]

he could be

++++ Loads of fast animation during the 'battle'.

++++ I love the wording of the moral. Chuckled heartily.

Nothing really negative to add... I still think he could be a tad more expressive though.

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At first I was marginally disappointed by the fact that it was a fight, as so many are on NG, but loved the way it ended.

Wonchop responds:

Heehee

[Bunnycat 2]

'mistake' made

+++ Sharp vectors

+++Really expressive voices

+++ The ninja's 'mistake' made me chuckle.

-- Maybe you could've had Bunnycat be a tad more expressive? His actual eyelids/shape-of-whites-shown never change, for example...

-- I felt the end could've been directed better. I think we needed a slightly longer build between showing the rancid flies, glass etc. and him licking it. Maybe he could've shrugged, maybe pausing a second longer... just my kick-ass opinion.

Wonchop responds:

Well expressions I'm a bit weary of since everything is tweened in this instead of the keyframing I use in the usual animations. I'll experiment with stuff in the future.